Think about the visual style of your music video and your website - the colours and the design in the background will need careful consideration before you commit to this.
Also remember your third panel needs some text - key quotes from the tracks or a thanks list.
I would suggest you go with the theme of the Rabbit's head hanging from tree or the main rabbit's head for the inside and blend the concepts - the blues blacks and look too heavy and dark - you can still use these for the website as background photos or as the Photo gallery and be awarded marks - Really consider this feedback, it must relate to the visual style of the website.
Also you forgot the spine and the order in which these need to fit together.
What about the album title, the barcode, the institutional text at the bottom on the back?
Using the short skirt sets up a sexualised image - which is fine - but is this how you intended to sell her? Would this maybe better in the inside so it is less prominant?
Think about the visual style of your music video and your website - the colours and the design in the background will need careful consideration before you commit to this.
ReplyDeleteAlso remember your third panel needs some text - key quotes from the tracks or a thanks list.
I would suggest you go with the theme of the Rabbit's head hanging from tree or the main rabbit's head for the inside and blend the concepts - the blues blacks and look too heavy and dark - you can still use these for the website as background photos or as the Photo gallery and be awarded marks - Really consider this feedback, it must relate to the visual style of the website.
Also you forgot the spine and the order in which these need to fit together.
ReplyDeleteWhat about the album title, the barcode, the institutional text at the bottom on the back?
Using the short skirt sets up a sexualised image - which is fine - but is this how you intended to sell her? Would this maybe better in the inside so it is less prominant?